-chasing the morning star down a rural highway, long before dawn has broken
-the sun filtering through the clouds
-my accidental tire tracks through the snow bank
More to come.
Edit: 11 February 2007
-my lover does not walk with her gaze pointed forward; rather, she sends it askance to shield her radiance.
Edit: 13 February 2007
-this morning, we lay very still together and through the haze of a dream, I could feel a heart beating but I couldn't tell if it was mine or yours and that's the way I'm going to keep it